How you look after a pony
you will need
water,chaff,nuts
paddock,shelter,covers,rugs
1 before you put your horse/pony in the paddock put water in the trough
2 if it is hot put your horse straight in the paddock. but if it is raining put a water proof rug on him/her
3 make sure that he/she is happy
4 find a friend for it. it could be a cow,goat, a miniature pony.
check if they are happy.
what was easy to choosing my topic what was hard thinking of different ways to describe how to look after a pony
This is very good i liked how you said make sure the horse is happy.
ReplyDeleteIt was nice how you described the food in the you will need.
maybe next time take another look at your full-stops and when to use them.
-Natalie =)
it's cool
ReplyDeletevery nice but you could say how to make your horse/pony happy its not a horse rug its a horse cover.
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