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Friday, August 27, 2021

maia poroaki

2 comments:

  1. I can see that you have had to think hard about Maia's feelings and description of him. Remember to include why he is feeling upset/sad/angry. The reasons why helps us to understand Maia in a more indepth way.

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  2. Hi Olivia,
    Great to see that you have been thinking about Maia. I wonder why he was a lazy, selfish and unfriendly character.

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